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Old 12-02-2006, 08:53 AM   #11 (permalink)
benkashmir
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if you can, bring it to life! :)

i have few picky crits for your picture...
they are not serious, because as i said, the picture is beatifull, but they are things that when i stare too much at the picture i notice. :)

the two tower, by the terrain and perspective it is appear that they are in the same distance of viewer, however, one is smaller and offcontrast, which makes it appear much more far away.. it is confusing abit..

the blending of the small tight builded houses seems bad with the cliffs behind them.. maybe if you could raise some to be higher then the hill ground so they will stand up abit it and break the round shape of the hill..

the birds... if you look at the far birds.. they appear to be in the size of a big window.. which is really really big.. however, the short distanced birds seem the same type of bird but look relatevly much smaller comparing to far ones..

so either scale up the close ones, or scale down the far ones.. you could, of course, go fantasy and make those birds a small dragons which will indicate hugh size of the buildings :)

the two eatern towers (from angkor wat maybe?) dont blend with the western castle in the far top right.. i suggest you replace it with a some sort of buddhist temple.
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